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They say that I can't last much longer,
Grinning as I scream in pain
And laughing as I gasp for air.
But they won't reach their goal.

"Daddy, you'll be back, won't you?"
Her words still echo in my head,
A piece of happiness I keep within.
"Of course, my angel. Sooner than you'd think."

Darkness embraces my consciousness,
And every breath becomes a struggle,
But still I hear her worried voice.
"Promise?" she asks. "Promise." I answer.

And as I lie here on the floor,
Beaten, bloody, and alone,
I feel my heart beating in my chest,
Fighting to fulfill my promise.

"But how can you know?" she calls
As I'm halfway out the door.
I smile as I bend down to hug her.
"for you I'll be invincible."


And though my world is made of pain,
And my blood seems caught on fire,
I draw one breath after another,
And know that I'll return alive.
:iconanna-viktoria:
This is my entry for :iconthe-beauty-of-art:'s Literature contest [link]

This poem turned out to be pretty depressing... ^^; But I gave it the best possible ending! (at least the best I could think of :shrug:)

Hope you like it! :D

If you liked this, also look at my other poems! :)
Ruins: [link]
Hero: [link]
One Voice: [link]
That Moment: [link]
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You are awesomE!!~!
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:iconanna-viktoria:
Thank you so much! :tighthug: I'm so glad you liked my poems! If you want to, you can also take a look at my gallery [link] for more!
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Mood: Amazed ~Priya-Kumar Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
See? You ARE perfect!
Amazing piece
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:iconanna-viktoria:
Thank you so much! :tighthug:
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~luvicoffee Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That made me want to cry it was so amazing
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:iconanna-viktoria:
Thank you! :hug: I'm really glad you liked it! :dance:
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:iconjunozpp:
I'm impressed. I thoroughly enoyed it. Thanks for writing it! Made my evening. :)
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:iconanna-viktoria:
Thanks! :D I'm glad you liked it!
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*cee69 Aug 5, 2012  Student Writer
I usually don't read poems (I just delete them) but this one just dragged me to the end O.O
Really awesome poem :D

~cee
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