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Run, run, cling to your life!
Race from the past and escape from the future,
Fly towards the setting sun…
And think only of her.

Let the rain wash away your memories,
Let the wind blow away your despair,
Let nature replace your home…
And remember her last moments.

See only her eyes, as they swim in tears,
See only her hands, dyed in blood.
Recall the day that broke your heart
And shattered your dreams.

And then, when your lungs burn,
When your eyes have no more tears to shed,
When you’ve raced destiny and battled sorrow,
Slow your pace, and calm your heart.

Turn back, to embrace your past and welcome the future,
To release your grief and let go of your pain,
To return to your life, to accept your fate,
And to adopt hope for what is to come.
So, this poem is about what to do when you feel really depressed. To put it simply.

I guess I could have used any example of what could be the reason for the sadness, but I chose the death of someone loved because I think that's the time when moving forward seems the hardest, but when we must move on.

Hope you like it! :D

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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I personally like this work A LOT. The reason is simple, it has a really well thought theme. Most works are rather depressing or only encouraging and uplifting. This describes very well what a person feels like when depressed and then brings the light forward. A beautiful work.
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Anna-Viktoria Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
Thank you so much! :hug:
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome :)
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TheJabberCat Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This describes my life so well. it's so good I swear that you must be psychic!!! :)
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Anna-Viktoria Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
:D It's my telepathic skills. =P

I'm glad you liked it! :happybounce:
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EvelynTaliette Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student Writer
Lovely. Almost reminds me of an altered version of a shanty- a lingering call, a song many sing in those moments of overwhelming emotion.
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Anna-Viktoria Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Thanks! :D I'm glad you liked it! :dance:
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice. Run to the hills...
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Anna-Viktoria Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
I'm glad you liked it! :D
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