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I found a treasure on the street,
More precious than anything I ever saw.
He was hiding in the shadows,
Unnoticed by those who never look.

But I saw him, filled with light,
With a heart of gold and calming warmth.
I saw him, hiding in the darkness,
Hoping for some light to reach his eyes.

I knew what he was waiting for,
I knew how he felt, day for day,
Where hope seemed unreachable,
That boy whose life seemed worthless and dark.

I saw the surprise he felt,
When I stopped and reached towards him,
"What are you doing in that corner?
Look around, it's a bright and sunny day!"

Slowly he nodded and stood,
his large eyes finally turned towards the light,
his children's face almost too thin
to hold that rare smile, more precious than a diamond.

But as he stepped towards me
His smile wavered and died,
As doubt invaded his mind,
And happiness seemed just a dream.

"Why would you help me?
I have nothing to give."
I smiled and took his little hand,
Leaving behind the darkness he knew.

"Will you smile for me again sometime?"
:iconanna-viktoria:
I haven't written anything for a while, so I thought it was time to write another poem! :D

I hope you like it!

Here are the links to some of my other poems!
Hero: [link]
One Voice: [link]
That Moment: [link]
Invisible Child: [link]
Invincible:[link]
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~NotenSMSK Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful! This was straightforward and well portrayed. I liked the ending especially. Very well written and executed. The last line has not only depth but quite a sweet meaning!
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:iconanna-viktoria:
Thank you so much for your feedback! :hug:
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~NotenSMSK Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome :)
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~Priya-Kumar Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
A smiling face - truly the best treasure! Well done!!! ;-)
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:icondemonrobber:
We all need the support of others to help us shine. An uplifting tale. Nicely done.
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:iconanna-viktoria:
Thanks! :hug: I'm glad you liked it! :D
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Mood: Joy ~SplitNinja Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Happiness is the best treasure.
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