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As I rise from my grave,
The place you had thought of
As my eternal resting place,
I see you turn pale with shock
Mumbling inextinguishable words.
Excuses flowing out of your mouth
As a river races
To leave behind the mountain
That gifted him with life.
Because you know the question
That rules my mind and heart,
That forces me to return
To the cold, bloody world
That I thought I'd left forever.
Was the fight worth my death?
Mine, and all those others,
Whose corpses still scatter the fields,
Unrecognizable skulls and bones
Soon to be buried without a name.
Of course, you answer,
Not once meeting my eyes.
The fight was important
To reach the aim, that big aim
We all struggled to reach.
Tell me, what aim? I ask
With an ironic, deathly smile
For we both know the truth:
There was no aim but war,
No aim but death and blood
Caused by revenge and hatred,
Feelings of those who never once
Stepped onto the battlefields.
Again your mouth opens,
Moving to your excuses,
Words that I don't want to hear.
I laugh, a laugh as cold
And as dead as I am.
I see, I say, you have no answer,
No words to justify my pain.
I can't change that anymore.
But then, at least, promise me:
Promise you won't forget me,
Nor my comrades, all those who fell,
Like me, never to breathe again.
Do not forget. Not our pain,
Not our suffering,
And not our sacrifice.
Promise. Promise that you won't forget.
The place you had thought of
As my eternal resting place,
I see you turn pale with shock
Mumbling inextinguishable words.
Excuses flowing out of your mouth
As a river races
To leave behind the mountain
That gifted him with life.
Because you know the question
That rules my mind and heart,
That forces me to return
To the cold, bloody world
That I thought I'd left forever.
Was the fight worth my death?
Mine, and all those others,
Whose corpses still scatter the fields,
Unrecognizable skulls and bones
Soon to be buried without a name.
Of course, you answer,
Not once meeting my eyes.
The fight was important
To reach the aim, that big aim
We all struggled to reach.
Tell me, what aim? I ask
With an ironic, deathly smile
For we both know the truth:
There was no aim but war,
No aim but death and blood
Caused by revenge and hatred,
Feelings of those who never once
Stepped onto the battlefields.
Again your mouth opens,
Moving to your excuses,
Words that I don't want to hear.
I laugh, a laugh as cold
And as dead as I am.
I see, I say, you have no answer,
No words to justify my pain.
I can't change that anymore.
But then, at least, promise me:
Promise you won't forget me,
Nor my comrades, all those who fell,
Like me, never to breathe again.
Do not forget. Not our pain,
Not our suffering,
And not our sacrifice.
Promise. Promise that you won't forget.
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My Beautiful Filth
My Beautiful Filth:
We'll start with the rose petals
scattered lavishly across the bed
A symbolic collage of my broken thoughts
like memories crushed and thrown into the winds
they lie where they fall, forever forgotten...
Tacks and nails shall line the floor!
A perfect representation of my painful steps
To walk forward was to suffer
to stand still was to endure
Like the insults thrown at me, like the physical abuse
they drive their way into my skin and remain embedded
Unable to be removed except by force
And now comes the masterpiece, the perfect finishing touch
A wall of words and photographs depicting my sorrows and greivance
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Aren't You Ashamed Yet?
Aren't You Ashamed Yet?:
A Mask
Truly an object of mystique and mystery
A simple device, with a painted layer
That conceals a face of rotting worms
Oh, I'm sorry, was I supposed to overlook it?
Let me rephrase it in a more appropriate manner
You are a cowardly, pathetic, miserable, filthy
Unintelligent, soul-sucking, perfidious, bag of rotting worms
You who once held my respect, you who were once my friend
you shared in my secrets and you shared in my dreams
But in the end, it was the lies
The horrible, filthy lies that spew forth from your tainted lips...
I guess it was a simple decision
I had no need to keep up this facade
an
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Dear Writer
Dear Writer,
I don’t like you. I’ve never liked you. Unfortunately, I need you. I need you to tell my story. I need you to create my world. I need you to set me free.
I need your fingers typing on those keys, I need your mind riddling out the problems, and I need you to plough onward and upward no matter how hard it gets. Sweat, blood, and tears, I don’t care. You’ve got to fight this war, battle at a time, and win it. So I can be more.
It’s a slim hope, but it is the only one I have. In your head I am bound to mortality, frailty, and the limit of your meagre imagination. Out there – out there – I
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Our unit in history right now is WWI. So we watched this documentary in class about the war and it's consequences, and it also mentioned this movie made during the war by some french guy (sorry, I can't remember the title or the name of the person who made it, but I'll ask on monday and put it in the description then... ) about soldiers coming out of their graves asking the living whether their death was worth the fight. So this poem is kind of like the continuation...?
This poem is also submitted and written for 's prompt [link]
Here's another poem I wrote on WW1:
By Christmas...: [link]
Hope you like it!
This poem is also submitted and written for 's prompt [link]
Here's another poem I wrote on WW1:
By Christmas...: [link]
Hope you like it!
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Free verse dealing with the sadness of war.
'Do not forget. Not our pain,
Not our suffering,
And not our sacrifice'
'Do not forget. Not our pain,
Not our suffering,
And not our sacrifice'